What Not To Write In Your Resume Introduction

By Angsuman Chakraborty, Gaea News Network
Thursday, July 27, 2006

To: Over 500 email addresses starting with support@

Respected Sir,

With due respect after tensed from a valuable discussions with you I’m
tender myself as a suitable competitor as per our requirements and need.
Here my proposal is to join your esteemed organization in a full time
permanent responsible space with handsome salary and project commission
where I can value these workload follows in both Marketing and Software
Division.

To summarize:
1. Check your spellings (F7 in MS Word is your friend)
2. Check your grammar.
3. Do not mass-email and not use BCC; do not mass-email (spam) period.
4. Above all, don’t refer to fictitious discussions (which never took place).

Filed under: Headline News, How To, Microsoft
Discussion

Phil Bowles
August 1, 2006: 6:21 pm

Grammar and typos be damned! Where is the line between “bad grammar” and “bad english” ? If english speaking is a requirement for the post, I’d rather have someone who can AT LEAST string a coherent sentence together, even if it is badly spelled!

The “covering letter” was close to Gibbersih, IMHO.

July 28, 2006: 3:59 am

Klaus,

First of all I don’t believe anyone should mass-email resumes. Even if anyone does that then at least he should either send theme separately or BCC them.
> BCC to which mail addresses?
Email addresses of the recruiters.
BCC’s ensure one recruiter cannot see the other 499 recruiter’s he has simultaneously emailed to.

> I’m no native English speaker

Neither am I :)

July 28, 2006: 3:15 am

Why not use BCC? BCC to which mail addresses?
Is it forbidden blind-sending the mail to one’s own account?
Please be more specific –> also a good advice for some parts of a resume.

Klaus
P.S.: If you find grammar or spelling errors in my post: forgive me, I’m no native English speaker (building up a backup here ;-) )

July 27, 2006: 11:47 pm

UsedToBeAnH1B,

What bothered me most about this cover letter was that the person behind it is highly qualified and a manager in a multi-national company.


UsedToBeAnH1B
July 27, 2006: 3:02 pm

I was just pulling your chain :) Yea I got your drift and agree 100%. I find it particularly funny when I read resumes for QA people and they have typos in them.

July 27, 2006: 10:16 am

Good catch, fixed the typo. The problem in the critiqued email wasn’t simple typos but much deeper. Also the context of a blog entry is much trivial than writing a cover letter for a resume. Whenever I wrote my resumes I used to triple check my spelling and grammar.


UsedToBeAnH1B
July 27, 2006: 9:18 am

5. When critiquing others for not using a spell/grammar checker ensure that you proof your document.

“4. Above all, don’t refer to fictitious discussions which never too place. “

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