What Not To Write In Your Resume Introduction
By Angsuman Chakraborty, Gaea News NetworkThursday, July 27, 2006
To: Over 500 email addresses starting with support@
Respected Sir,
With due respect after tensed from a valuable discussions with you I’m
tender myself as a suitable competitor as per our requirements and need.
Here my proposal is to join your esteemed organization in a full time
permanent responsible space with handsome salary and project commission
where I can value these workload follows in both Marketing and Software
Division.
…
To summarize:
1. Check your spellings (F7 in MS Word is your friend)
2. Check your grammar.
3. Do not mass-email and not use BCC; do not mass-email (spam) period.
4. Above all, don’t refer to fictitious discussions (which never took place).
August 1, 2006: 6:21 pm
Grammar and typos be damned! Where is the line between “bad grammar” and “bad english” ? If english speaking is a requirement for the post, I’d rather have someone who can AT LEAST string a coherent sentence together, even if it is badly spelled! The “covering letter” was close to Gibbersih, IMHO. |
July 28, 2006: 3:59 am
Klaus, First of all I don’t believe anyone should mass-email resumes. Even if anyone does that then at least he should either send theme separately or BCC them. > I’m no native English speaker Neither am I |
July 28, 2006: 3:15 am
Why not use BCC? BCC to which mail addresses? Klaus |
July 27, 2006: 11:47 pm
UsedToBeAnH1B, What bothered me most about this cover letter was that the person behind it is highly qualified and a manager in a multi-national company. |
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July 27, 2006: 3:02 pm
I was just pulling your chain |
July 27, 2006: 10:16 am
Good catch, fixed the typo. The problem in the critiqued email wasn’t simple typos but much deeper. Also the context of a blog entry is much trivial than writing a cover letter for a resume. Whenever I wrote my resumes I used to triple check my spelling and grammar. |
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July 27, 2006: 9:18 am
5. When critiquing others for not using a spell/grammar checker ensure that you proof your document. “4. Above all, don’t refer to fictitious discussions which never too place. “ |
Phil Bowles